definitely

[RikGrimesIsDead]

DEFINITELY

 

(chorus)

 

Am i the best….?   DEFINITELY…..who’s doing it better….?   NOBODY

I’m here to stay….  PERMANENTLY….i’m doing it better….   ME

 

 

 

I’m definitely in 1st place no photo finish needed

your in the qualification category i’m number one seeded

the favourite,the special one, the rap game saviour

100mph and i aint slowing down my behaviour

for nobody…

i aint no crash test dummy you’ll see i’m quality

running from police to avoid the brutality

had enough of running so turned and pulled out my armoury

no way im going to jail for this f*cking brutal robbery

honestly i’m jesus christ of the monastery...  and quite possibly

the greatest of all time in anything i do,come at me and i beat you too

i don’t tell lies i only tell the truth,words on my page show you the proof

 

 

 

(chorus)

 

Am i the best….?   DEFINITELY…..who’s doing it better….?   NOBODY

I’m here to stay….  PERMANENTLY….i’m doing it better….   ME

 

 

 

You walking around still claiming to be the best in the business

put on my scorpion out fit and hit you Mortal Kombat …FINISH THIS

i get 1st place finish on Mario kart,you always be finishing last

i’ll be picking up my trophy whilst your still sending red shells up my arse

my array of weaponry is a biggie it aint no smalls

so big it makes you hypnotised,but one shot it makes you fall

if life was judged on arses id have the biggest baddest butt

probably break the internet just like Kanye’s wifely slut

Compared to you i’m a Rottweiler your just a pup

girls they want a real man to you they don’t want no scrubs

i’m definitely top of the charts in bringing controversy 

too busy collecting cheques where you’re learning ABC’s in nursery

 

 

 

(chorus)

 

Am i the best….?   DEFINITELY…..who’s doing it better….?   NOBODY

I’m here to stay….  PERMANENTLY….i’m doing it better….   ME

[Richard Tracey]

Rik- I really liked this one. The idea is a good one, but something that is used a lot in rap music.

 

I would be interested to hear what style of rap you are going for with this. I should heard Eminem as I was reading this and imaging someone rapping. It has a kind of angry delivery and that Eminem/Dre vibe would suit this. The chorus could be big, especially the ‘definitely’ part - multiple voices shouting it out.

 

The lyrics are good, but there were a couple of parts where to keep the rhyming of the rap going, I had to speed up on a few lines. I don’t know if you meant for that as a change of pace, but it may be you just need to remove a word or two to get the flow to run smoothly. Also watch for spelling e.g. ‘your’ and ‘you’re’. Sorry to be that person😉

 

Have you got a beat for this?