As summer leaves

[nigel lawry]

As summer leaves

sky's gone dull and dark

the moon glimmers at hope park

wind whimpers like a rabid dog

can't hide from the impending fog

it's the season to slow it down

we all know whats coming around

winter blues around the corner

call your ma,and warn her

fell a little pity for the tramp

warming his hands on a street lamp

beggin' not for cash but change

so alone and estranged

nowhere left to run

falling one by one

hustling like thieves

As summer leaves

Copyright ©2005Nigel Lawry

[Rudi]

beggin' not for cash but change

It may seem unlikely to many of us, but Im sure its true. Nice job mate!

[Steve]

beggin' not for cash but change

This is a brilliant line! At first glance i thought, that's the same thing!

Good stuff Nige! Nice to see you writing again.

[Nightwolf]

call your ma,and warn her seems a little forced into place, all in all great stuff.

an addition from my own Life,

as Summer left, so did she

[nigel lawry]

cheers guys

[merciful evans]

nice play on words. a multi-dimensional uni-verse.

[Alistair]

Class! Especially

wind whimpers like a rabid dog

[nigel lawry]

Class! Especially

cheers al