Set Aside

[Jeffery]

Everything gets set aside in my mind

When ever I see

You in a sundress, God bless whoever sent

Your presence

And I’ll take a pass on weekends and picnics

You know I can’t swing it 

We can just lounge around and stew

Me & you

 

Everything gets set aside in my mind

but I still want to die

[analyzethis]

dude you shouldn't write down stuff like I want to die. I spent a great deal of my teens depressed and constantly thinking things like that normalized the idea in my mind. You need to ask God to help you get out of this mindset and reach out to others to get to a better place.

[Jeffery]

On 2/13/2020 at 10:04 PM, analyzethis said:

dude you shouldn't write down stuff like I want to die. I spent a great deal of my teens depressed and constantly thinking things like that normalized the idea in my mind. You need to ask God to help you get out of this mindset and reach out to others to get to a better place.

I should have included a warning, I apologize! Sometimes when I write it’s just where my mind kinda goes, it’s also a lazy cop out. I’ll be more mindful moving forward!

[John W Selleck]

Hi Jeffery,

You need to move this and any other lyrics to https://forums.songstuff.com/forum/224-lyric-critique/

This forum is about how to write, suggestions or problems with songwriting etc.