Another love poem

[emptylane]

I have so much to say to you

If only you were asleep

For I am not as gentle as

The voices in your dream

I try to fit the mould of love

We see on TV screens

Convince myself that written love

Is what I really need

But when I shed all the layers

Of my true desire

I realise that the risks I take

may only get higher

So here I clear all worries now

For that feeling of being in love

And smile with only one thought in mind

Being with you is enough

This doesn't really have a title because I wrote it off the top of my head. It's basically just about being in love with a girl, and instead of aching to be loved back and worrying about what might happen, simply sitting back and realising if you really love the person, being with them is enough.

[Hope4Peace]

very deep.

you capture the feelings very well here.

nice work

[averagejoe]

This is smashing good. I like it.