A world perspective

[averagejoe]

Violence, sex and drugs

Love, power and hugs

Contrasts and different schemes

Nothing is as it seems

Different religions, opinions and dreams

Conflicts made out of beliefs

Trees loosing leafs

It all grows old

Inside my head

News of new deaths on the radio

I hear it every day

Frustration never helped

And neither did caring

The result is no action made

Edited April 5, 2006 by averagejoe

[Nightwolf]

Hey Espen,

I like this one a bunch. I would suggest taking out the second to last word (is ) it makes no contribution and IMHO interupts the flow. Good Work

[averagejoe]

Thank you , and I totally agree with you. Is there some way I can change the poem without having to delete it and post it again?not too familiar with this forum as you probably understand.

[merciful evans]

espen, you have a dark side dont you?

there is an edit post button somewhere near,

but after a while it dissapears

so you ideally need to make haste

or else youll have to copy and paste

[averagejoe]

espen, you have a dark side dont you?

there is an edit post button somewhere near,

but after a while it dissapears

so you ideally need to make haste

or else youll have to copy and paste

yep, I do have a dark side. But it's better to be honest about it, then to pretend that you care. It's easier to help those who need it, if you are a powerful person. I am just weak.