Closing time

[averagejoe]

My reasons for living are gone

The real deal with certain people has been shown

My chances for a bright future is blown

Now its closing time

And I don’t mind

The only thing I have to spend is a dime

And to go on living like this would be a crime

Love and hate brought me to this place

now the bartender says "nighty nite"

and turns off the light

There is no people to help me home in sight

It's closing time

[merciful evans]

this is about checking out i think

topping ones self

& home = safety

thanks

evans

[averagejoe]

this is about checking out i think

topping ones self

& home = safety

thanks

evans

hm, not sure about what you mean by this. hehe,sorry. well, anyways, you don't need to explain. I'm just a dumbass.

[merciful evans]

suicide

[averagejoe]

suicide

Ah,OK.

[Nightwolf]

I'm just a dumbass.

Espen, I notice you put yourself down a lot

[averagejoe]

Espen, I notice you put yourself down a lot

I'm afraid that's true. Can't help it really...

[Mudknot]

Didn't really catch the 'suicide' reference. Ijust saw it as a lonely drunk who has some problems (the biggest one is how the hell is he gonna get home!) But now I can see it.

Keep it up.

[averagejoe]

Didn't really catch the 'suicide' reference. Ijust saw it as a lonely drunk who has some problems (the biggest one is how the hell is he gonna get home!) But now I can see it.

Keep it up.

Thankx, I will. (=

[Rudi]

The problem of getting home seems the least of his problems.

THE REAL DEAL WITH CERTAIN PEOPLE part sounds too diplomatic for an emotional statement. NAME & SHAME em!

[averagejoe]

The problem of getting home seems the least of his problems.

THE REAL DEAL WITH CERTAIN PEOPLE part sounds too diplomatic for an emotional statement. NAME & SHAME em!

I agree ....But I'm not that kinda guy. I usually hide my feelings, but through some of my poems I express them. It helps.

[olivejuice3]

this is a really nice piece! you were just being humble when you said my last poem was better than anything you've written... keep on rockin haha

[averagejoe]

Hm, I'm not sure about that ..But, thanks