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By averagejoe
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averagejoe

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I exist

though I'm slightly invisible

I love

Though I'm mostly hated

I see

though I'm convinced that I act blind

I speak

though I'm hardly heard

I think

though It sometimes doesn't seem like I do

"People believe I am what they see Me as,

rather than what they do not see.

But I am the Great Unseen,

not what I cause Myself to be in any particular moment.

In a sense, I am what I am not.

It is from the Am-notness that I come, and to it I always return."

-Neale Donald Walsch

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Rudi

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You succeeded I think. Kant would enjoy this I reckon. Its about you, but its about everybody.

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john

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Hey

Very good. Simple but effective, with some excellent lines.

Nice one.

John

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