The Birds Rule the Day

[Nightwolf]

This came out when I tried to Write a Haiku:

The Birds Rule The Day

The man sounds come into play

Paradise is lost

Dirt mound, hellbound

I’m trying to understand

Paradise lost, the final cost

Breathe these dreams before me

Look to the birds

Casual, if not elegant

True nature in flux

What’s become of us

Can you fathom the loss

The final cost

The price of being human

Is much too high to pay

Count the loss

Give me primal power

Forget weakness

I will walk upon the earth

Forgive me for my weakness

Kill me for my sins

I walk the haunted graveyard

Forgive me Father,

For I know just what I do

[nigel lawry]

hey mr nightwolf

good stuff

nice flow to it and a great message

peace

nigel

[Nightwolf]

Thanks Nigel, It is one of my favorite non-songs

[Steve]

This is good stuff NW.

I love these lines.

Forgive me Father,

For I know just what I do

Whats a Haiku:?

[nigel lawry]

This is good stuff NW.

I love these lines.

Forgive me Father,

For I know just what I do

Whats a Haiku:?

an epigrammatic Japanese verse form of three short lines

;)

[olivejuice3]

niiiicccceee. its very hard to pull off a haiku in english very well but you proved them all wrong haha. great. hey nigel maybe we could extend our future book together to nightwolf too?

[nigel lawry]

yea why not lets make it an "open book" ;D

[Nightwolf]

maybe we could extend our future book together to nightwolf too?

I'm Honored.

A Haiku has a syllable count of 5-7-5

The Birds Rule The Day

The man sounds come into play

Paradise is lost

Then bam it just kept coming

[Alistair]

John Nightwolf, you are scary

[Nightwolf]

BOO

[Nightwolf]

:o