Prison Of The Mind

[Nightwolf]

If I am reading you correctly

You are just like me

Only you can cast the fetters

It is you who holds the key

Cast the stones of mediocrity

Or put them on a shelf

Head for strange and wondrous lands

Deep inside yourself

You are like me Brother

Straight and Strong of Mind

If you are in a prison Friend

It is by your own design

I cast not accusations

Or seek to make your mountains small

You like me shall rise again

And stand tall above them all

[Carnival]

I felt like this was written for me alone. Beautiful.

[Nightwolf]

I felt like this was written for me alone. Beautiful.

It was Friend, it was

[JanJohansen]

Hi John

This is wonderful and Norm is right, the reader feels like it's written to him/her alone, which IMHO a very well written none literal story does so well.

Wonderful and uplifting in the end.

Jan

[McnaughtonPark]

I had to go back and check the date you posted it, I thought it was for me too. Only, I didn't join here until after you wrote it. Earmark of timelessness.