I Hate Being Alone

[xXxMagicalYamBagxXx]

I can't stop thinking about

How much it hurt

And how it stung.

Those words you said tore me apart, limb from limb.

Empty I feel inside.

Broken

Every day I think about how much

I love you

Not a moment goes by that I don't think about your

Gorgeous eyes.

As make up runs down my face,

Lonley and hopeless,

One person is on my mind.

No one but you.

Every tear rolling down my cheek says I miss you.

xx

[nigel lawry]

sweet!!

[john]

Hey Rachel

Very good. I enjoyed it and it did what it said on the tin

Out of interest, do you write more poetry or lyrics?

I'm looking forward to reading your lyrics now

Cheers

John

[xXxMagicalYamBagxXx]

John:

I write more lyrics, but I don't personally think that my lyrics are better. I have two songs that I wrote on The Song Writer Forums. I'm trying to write more lyrics, but the verses and everything that I write is all for some reason separate, and none of it fits together.

xx

[john]

Hey

Well you've come to the right place! It's a pretty common problem. Not sure where it is, but there's a thread about hooks, message and theme somewhere which is definately worth reading. Have a read at some of our lyrics and songwriting articles too.

Cheers

John

[xXxMagicalYamBagxXx]

John:

Thanks! I have some really good lyrics, that really mean something to me, but I'm not sure on how to fit 'em all together. I have the first verse to a song, and not a chorus or a title. That's my problem. I'll read 'em now.

xx