Hope-less

[beautifuldisaster]

Deceptive freedom. Honest lies.

A charming, yet so dreadful guise.

Forgotten memories. Two hearts

Are in my chest, both torn apart.

Strong weakness of a wilted rose.

My two reflections, one disclosed.

A shadow of changing shapes.

The sorrow of different shades.

A bleeding wrist of stangers'faith.

A crystal tear on no one's face.

Odd soulless hearts in mystic frames,

You have no voices, know no shame!

Just when you're dumb, your words are true.

I'm hopeless. Well. But who are you??

You're nothingness behind green eyes,

Mistakes that never happen twice.

You're just a riddle for a day

To figure out - and stay away

From all this simply perfect mess,

Where I am hope, and you - are less.

[john]

Hey

A nice end on this one BD. Nice emotive images too. Thanks for sharing!

Cheers

John

[Da Prophecy]

The rhythm of this one is really good and it ends well. I will say that it's a little abstract to me. This is of course not necessarily a bad thing. Good job overall though.