Whoa Kel, that was awesome, funny and smart.
I have to take it all in!You are so right on the bridge, i mentioned that in my notes that i hated it...or something like that.
you said:
"Maybe I'm reading things that aren't there but this is what the song is saying to me. I think the girl is fluctuating between being the victim and the predator, and that is maybe how teenage girls think about this time in their lives, I don't know, I've never been a teenage girl. (Not meant as a smartass comment.) If this is the sort of story you are telling, be consistent with it... start as the victim then move towards being predator and keep going in that direction. (Predator seems too strong a word, but I'm meaning somebody who is looking to stand up for herself, and is not willing to let things happen, she wants to make things happen... I hope you know what I am getting at.)"
you are spot on!
but have one quesiton to start: Did I miss an article somewhere? one of your blogs?
Stress/accent points
ps. my syllables are perfect!
lol