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ames1212

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  1. I actually am reading his book right now. I am working on the metophors and trying not to use the same worn out phrases and clichés now. Some of my favorite country songs do have tiny stories that the chorus ties together. Although I do see your point. it is a great book and thank you for the feedback and advice.
  2. This is a cool lyric, it kind of reminded me of hotel California for some reason. You did a good job with it.
  3. Hi james, I love the metophors and the creative words that made it something different, not so cliché and generic. I do agree with goldy , one more verse to complete the story would make it really good. I loved the creativity behind it though. Good work.
  4. Love is a bridge- CC 12/26/2010 Written by: Amy Abernathy You see that child without food to eat, You walk on by, you walk on by. You’re too caught up in your own little world, To see that kid is in need. A little time and a tender heart, Could give that child a brand new start. You can touch someone’s heart, With just a little love. There are so many hungry mouths to feed. You can make a difference with just one, you see. Because…… Love is a bridge, Love is a bridge, love is a bridge To a heart. Love is a highway to a brand new start. Love is a bridge that connects our minds, Love is patient, love is kind. A lady is sad because her husband is gone: He fought that cancer for oh so long. She needs someone to show they care, Someone to talk to, and just be there. You can say it’s much too much, Or you can reach and show her love. A helping hand is sent from up above. Because…… Love is a bridge, Love is a bridge, love is a bridge To a heart. Love is a highway to a brand new start. Love is a bridge that connects our minds, Love is patient, love is kind. A young family lost their home, Hurricane came and everything’s gone. They sit in a shelter wondering what to do. Then people brought food and a little tenderness too. We can help if we open our hearts: We just got to do our part. Show some love to someone today; It might make you have a sunny day. Because…… Love is a bridge, Love is a bridge, love is a bridge To a heart. Love is a highway to a brand new start. Love is a bridge that connects our minds, Love is patient, love is kind. The things you give, it all comes back, It may give our heart what it lacks. Take some time and tell them you care, Open your eyes and be aware. CC Amy Abernathy 2011 Gagirlames@hotmail.com
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