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louielouwhy

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  1. After reading some of the verses they lead me to a brief sense of deep thought .  At some points it lured me to where I thought their meaning might be heading.  But following verses sidetracked the lure towards a connection.  Those luring verses, I thought were interesting enough to make other songs out of.  From my experience with my own creations, I found I had to redo them multiple times by extracting some lyrics out and replacing others which I think are closer to my points in order to give them the overall meaning that is intended.  I think the song has too many needless verses that don't quite emphasize enough about the ones that I think are the substantially meaningful ones that moved me towards where I thought the song was going.  But that is just my opinion.  There are plenty of songs out there that are a lot worse, and they make millions.

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