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Review This Song "stellar"
in Mags
A blog by Mary Mags Khaila in General
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After reading some of the verses they lead me to a brief sense of deep thought . At some points it lured me to where I thought their meaning might be heading. But following verses sidetracked the lure towards a connection. Those luring verses, I thought were interesting enough to make other songs out of. From my experience with my own creations, I found I had to redo them multiple times by extracting some lyrics out and replacing others which I think are closer to my points in order to give them the overall meaning that is intended. I think the song has too many needless verses that don't quite emphasize enough about the ones that I think are the substantially meaningful ones that moved me towards where I thought the song was going. But that is just my opinion. There are plenty of songs out there that are a lot worse, and they make millions.