I'm a longtime dabbler in writing lyrics. I have no professional/commercial aspirations, and I have no gift for making music, although I listen to a great deal of it. So writing lyrics is my creative musical outlet. I probably knock out a couple of partial lyrics per week, but my main problem is that I tend to get my ideas down on paper, and then never get around to polishing them up. They always seem to remain works in progress that I never quite finish before moving on to the next one. I thought I'd try out a forum like this one in hopes that criticism and maybe some ideas/suggestions might help me get the satisfaction of finally feeling that some of my lyrics are actually complete.
I tend to write fairly straightforward lyrics, as opposed to more elusive or "poetic" lyrics. I'm particularly partial to story-telling songs. But sometimes I feel that my efforts are too literal, and not poetic enough. Maybe some good feedback will help me reach a happy medium.
My musical preferences growing up were fairly typical - - 60's & 70's pop and rock. These days I'm more into American Mongrel Music - - that mix of rock/country/pop/blues/folk/etc also known as Americana, alternative-country, and roots music. My tastes now run more towards off-the-beaten-path artists and bands, rather than with the mainsteam.
Although I feel utterly unqualified to pass judgment on anyone else's lyrical work, I have read here that we are all encouraged to do critiques. So I went ahead and jumped in before I had even done this intro, or posted any of my own lyrics, when I ran across a lyric that caught my eye while browsing this forum. Dive right in to unfamiliar waters, I say!
Anyway, I hope that some of you will take the time to comment on my own "lyrics in search of a song" when I pick out a few and load them on the site. Thanks.
Garry