Dear JD
If I was inclined to, I could point out that because you did such a fantastic job with MP's song, that surely you could think up another equally fantastic melody for us. But it is your challenge and your rules I guess, so here as requested is a sample of something I put together using my own voice - God help me!
DO NOT EVEN DARE MENTION THE SINGING - I MEAN IT!! - I'm aware of my capabilities and at an X-Factor audition you will never find me.
I've had real trouble thinking up a melody which is meant to be uplifting and motivational - I'm not sure that comes across very well. I envisaged a soft slow start, building up to a powerful chorus, and taking into account what Lazz said about the chorus needing something after it, I agree. I haven't added it but I think it needs something like... "Make it Mine" after the last Make it happen. Tad cheesy, I know.
I have only "sung" one verse and chorus... I couldn't endure any more than that.
So now that I have made my reluctant debut, what dare I ask, is next? And in particular have you any thoughts about your contribution to the challenge? After all, you did do such a very, extremely excellent job with Challenge #1 -
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