JD, I worked on version 1 of your melody like you said. It was fun. I just want to improve my writing and it is a good opportunity for me to work with a melody which I never done before. I am glad that you shared your tune with us and people like me can practice with it.
Danka
My love is far away
Feel it touch me
Whisper cute words
How sweet can love be?
We’re close like love birds
Promise me this
Move in with me for good
Seal our love with a kiss
Rise:
I will go with you if I could
No, nobody knows how I feel
Chorus:
My love is far away
My love is distant
Why don’t you come to me, I feel so lonely
I just want to
Just be close to
Close, close to you
Sunrise is now
Breakfast for two
I want more time, but how
To spend more time with you
You travel by plane
I’ll visit you, I would
Wish to see you again
Rise:
I will go with you if I could
No, nobody knows how I feel
Chorus:
My love is far away
My love is distant
Why don’t you come to me, I feel so lonely
I just want to
Just be close to
Close, close to you
Danuta Gal ©