Define Me

[Nightwolf]

For now I'll call this a Poem, although it reads more like Lyrics and will probably be a Song someday, check it out:

Define Me

Trying to find the Life that defines me

Lost in trying to find me

Looking out

On the long lost road

Trying to find the secret

Key to my Soul

I’m lost

Can’t find my way out

Of this trap

Of this charade they sold me

I’m dying

Minute by minute

Digesting this lie that they told me

Trying to find the Life that defines me

Lost in trying to find me

Looking out

On the long lost road

Trying to find the secret

Key to my Soul

(Bridge)

Growing up

Growing old and dying

Still they won’t admit they’re lying

I’m trying to define me

I’m lost in trying to find me

Trying to find the Life that defines me

Lost in trying to find me

Looking out

On the long lost road

Trying to find the secret

Key to my Soul

Trying to find the Life that defines me

Lost in trying to find me

[nigel lawry]

hey mr nightwolf

this is both  lyric/poem

it reads well and i like it

peace

nigel

[olivejuice3]

great job nightie! i could definitely see this as a song  

[Nightwolf]

Thanks guys, maybe I'll try and get some   going for this soon.

[Alistair]

This will be great as a song and it stands alone well too.

[merciful evans]

applause

[Steve]

great job nightie!

;D Nightie nightie wolfy...   ;D  

[Steve]

This does read more like a lyric! I look forward to hearing it as a song. Nice one Wolf!

[Nightwolf]

Thanx folks, it might actually make i to lyric form. Stay tuned

[Nightwolf]

This is now set to Music and in the prelim stages of recording.

[nigel lawry]

cool