Evening Comes So Quietly

[67nick]

Evening comes so quietly

As it drinks away the fire

Of the burning sunlight

Night reappears, yet again

Wearing a sparkling dress

Of the shinning stars tonight

Moon seems dismayed

Suffering from the tremendous pain

Burning red it looks,

As it reappears so quietly

Moon, Why don’t you?

Tell me a story of twilight

Sing a song for me, tonight

I am feeling so lonely

I am hurting from the inside

Why don’t you smile for me a little?

Why don’t you dance with me tonight?

Your face could be deceiving

All red and shining bright

Night is looking so pretty tonight

Fiery day is extinguished

Evening drank away

The fire! From the sunlight tonight

Evening comes so quietly

Nick Kler

[neoism]

great stuff nick..

its a unique style..

Evening comes so quietly

As it drinks away the fire

Of the burning sunlight

i m fan of yours...!!

Prayag

[Mazrocon]

This is my favorite by you!

"Wearing a sparkling dress

Of the shinning stars tonight"

Great imagery!!

I just love this whole poem, I don't see anything wrong with it

~TIMOTHY~