Angel

[Guest SCALERA]

I am a 60 year old musician. I had my first performance at 9 years old. I started writing songs about 20 years ago just for fun. Recently, a friend found one of my recordings and played it at a party, eveyone liked it. To start

out performing at an early age and not have my own recording available had always bothered me, that incident made me become serious about my compositions. This is the song my friend played.... I would love to listen to suggestions as to how to appeal to the mainstream.

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http://www.soundclick.com/SCALERA

Angel

I was tired sad and lonely

Needed something else

In this hum drum life of mine

I’m often by myself

Can’t accept the fact

My life would always stay this way

Needed a good friend

To help me through each day

I was feeling deep despair

Wondering what to do

Then you came into my life

You showed me something new

Chorus

You’re my angel

You brighten up my day

You’re my angel

Promise me you’ll stay

You’re my angel

My heart is in your hands

Walking side by side

Through love land

You’re my angel

You’re my angel

Someone to talk to

Someone to care for

You’re always there for me

Whenever I’m in need

You give me pleasure

Far beyond compare

I surrender baby

You’re the answer to my prayer

You’re very special

Your love feels so right

Loving you is easy

You’re such a sweet delight

Chorus

You’re my angel

You brighten up my day

You’re my angel

Promise me you’ll stay

You’re my angel

My heart is in your hands

Were walking side by side

Through love land

You’re my angel

You’re my angel

You’re my angel

You brighten up my day

You’re my angel

Promise me you’ll stay

Be my angel

Forevermore I pray

Be my angel

Chase the dark away

You’re my angel

Ummmmm ummm

You’re my angel

[Venus]

It's a good production. "You're my angel" has been done before but it went well with this progression. I like the singer too. Very cute song.

[john]

Hi

Welcome to Songstuff!

There's a song review board under the creative tab, you'll probably get more useful/detailed comments in there. Just follow the guidelines and you're away

Cheers

John

[Nightwolf]

Welcome to Songstuff

Cool Tune

[neoism]

welcome aboard !

hope to learn from you !