Hello :-)

[Dolly]

Hi everyone

My name is Dolly (not my real name just a nickname)

I am 17 years old and started writing lyrics when I first picked up a pencil

I remember the chorus to one that I wrote when I was six...

''What happened to my bike,

I bet it was Mike,

He's always been jelous of me,

It was red,

I want to go to bed,

I think I need a wee.''

My writing skills have definately changed since then!

Anyway, the main reason I signed up to this site was so maybe I could get some healthy criticism on my lyrics.

Thanks for reading

Dolly xx

[Steve]

''What happened to my bike,

I bet it was Mike,

He's always been jelous of me,

It was red,

I want to go to bed,

I think I need a wee.''

lol Hello Dolly, well hello, Dolly, it's so nice to have you here where you belong.

[john]

hi Dolly

Welcome to Songstuff!

[musicthom]

lol Hello Dolly, well hello, Dolly, it's so nice to have you here where you belong.

i am so shocked that you would use this line not that it ever crossed to my mind

Hi dolly welcome

[Dennee]

Hi everyone

My name is Dolly (not my real name just a nickname)

I am 17 years old and started writing lyrics when I first picked up a pencil

I remember the chorus to one that I wrote when I was six...

''What happened to my bike,

I bet it was Mike,

He's always been jelous of me,

It was red,

I want to go to bed,

I think I need a wee.''

My writing skills have definately changed since then!

Anyway, the main reason I signed up to this site was so maybe I could get some healthy criticism on my lyrics.

Thanks for reading

Dolly xx

Hi, Dolly--welcome! So...WAS it Mike?