Looking Up Into The Starlit Sky

[shawshy]

"looking up into the starlit sky"

Looking up into the starlit sky

Wishing I were a thousand miles away

But it’s just another dream, like ones wish to fly.

The many stars in the sky, all vanish one by one

Lying down, head on the ground, eyes in the sky

Staring at the clouds as they go by…

Have you ever wished

You could get really high

Imagining the clouds

and a magic world nearby.

Closing your eyes

Breathing in the scent

Remembering the time when you said goodbye

The last moments, and the words you meant

The permanent hope which still lies.

Shaping the clouds,

Making them seem like other things,

I did this long ago,

Making my eyes exaggerate.

Eyes open at the crack of dawn

I lie there, waiting to reform.

Unable to walk in a straight line

My heads elsewhere

As I’m heading towards the sunshine

My eyes can’t cope with the glare..

feedback appreciated for improvement.

[Mazrocon]

Wow shawshy this is rather beautiful work! I don't know why i'm the only one commenting on it!?!? I like how it's very imaginative yet very relate able at the same time.

"Shaping the clouds,

Making them seem like other things,

I did this long ago,

Making my eyes exaggerate."

Pure genius!

Keep writing!

~TIMOTHY~