Hey Guys!:)

[AmyPx]

Well, im new here, so i thought id introduce myself to the good people of songstuff! Im 13 and female, call me amy, and have been pretty much obsessed with music since i was 4. I used to sit and look out of my window as a child and sing songs that id make up in my head about what i saw outside, songwriting is something ive always loved, even though im not too great at it. Anyway, id like to share something i just thought up like a couple minutes ago, i mean i dont know if you guys will like it but its a start. Here it is:)

How Did I

How did i fall, for someone so cruel,

How did i fall, for someone like you,

How did i fall, for someone so cruel,

Oh how did i fall for you!

I used to think me and you were one,

But the game was lost, the game wasnt won,

You were my moon, you were my sun,

You were my laugh, you were my fun,

I guess from my mistakes ima have to learn,

If you play with fire, well you're gonna get burnt!

I never set out to be just another game,

I wish that i could somehow stop this pain,

I think that i need to just get on a plane,

Fly somewhere far to help keep me sane,

Heart shuts down at the sound of your name,

Im glad your gone, im not glad you came!

How did i fall, for someone so cruel,

How did i fall, for someone like you,

How did i fall, for someone so cruel,

Oh how did i fall for you!

First love cuts deep i can tell you the truth,

Now your gone i got nothing to lose,

Aint gonna drown you out with boys and booze,

Aint gonna mope, gonna let myself loose,

Dont need to bide time, just gonna throw up my deuce

Singing,

How did i fall, for someone so cruel,

How did i fall, for someone like you,

How did i fall, for someone so cruel,

Oh how did i fall for you!

Ill never know just how, we got to where we are right now,

We took it slow, but im still crushed,

My heart it hurts, my face stained flushed,

I dont really know just how to let go,

But baby ima do it you'll be part of my past,

You were my first, not gonna be my last!

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Reading it back it doesnt sound right... but with the tune in my head everything fits perfect.. dont know how it will sound to you guys. Anyway, hope to get to know some of you guys further, and ciao for now!

[Mahesh]

Welcome to Songstuff Amy ! Tom is right,you will get better feed back in the appropriate section,some experienced lyricists we have here dont have time enough to view all sections,so you see the point

[justsoulin]

If that just came out of your head at your age, I'm packing it in and retiring LOL

Welcome Amy. As above, take a bit of time to wander the forum and find out where to post the different ones. So lyrics for critiquing go in the lyrics critique section and so on.

Take a look in the lounge too. Lot's going on in there.

[neoism]

welcome aboard !

[FinnArild]

Welcome, Amy ...

[Zul Zydee]

Welcome,

Nice lyrics. Love to hear your music..Please send me your song links.