Snuggling

[jimharmon]

Snuggling

I don't want sex right now

Perhaps later after the stresses of the day

leave my mind and body relaxed

and open to our passions.

When we are both in that spontaneous state.

Right now I just want to hold you,

smell the perfume in your hair

and nuzzle the back of your neck.

Right now I want to draw you into me

feel the softness of your skin

and let your toes curl over mine.

Right now I want to hear our breathing

change to unison as we form together

Not stiff like spoons in a drawer

but softly like the folds of your satin gown

draped deliciously over the chair.

Right now I just want to feel the tensions of the day

those little gnawing, unnamed fears and uncertainties

ebb from my body making room for you

to fill me up with your essence,our shared oneness.

Right now,I just want to regain who I am

when I'm fully with you and you're with me

together,complete and safe.

Right now, I just want to snuggle!

[jimharmon]

This was posted as a poem but with a few minor changes could be turned into a lyric. Re posted for Sam to help her understand premise, story and how to lead the reader to a conclusion.

[samanthaG94]

Ok so, the premise is you dont want sex right now,

the story is that you're too tired,

And the conclusion is that you just want to snuggle?

I'm probably completely wrong but that's what i'm thinking.....

[jimharmon]

You got that completely RIGHT ! There should be no misinterpertation about what you mean... unless you want to fool the reader and put in a kicker at the very end. I do that a lot with some of my lyrics. It gives a bit of unexpected humor.

A good example of that would be my lyric " Wait Wait Don't Tell Me"

[samanthaG94]

You got that completely RIGHT ! There should be no misinterpertation about what you mean... unless you want to fool the reader and put in a kicker at the very end. I do that a lot with some of my lyrics. It gives a bit of unexpected humor.

A good example of that would be my lyric " Wait Wait Don't Tell Me"

Oh great

Ok I'll read that now

[cisco]

could very well be lyric Jim, your very good, I can`t elaborate like that..the stuff I do is so short and choppy

just a note to let you know I was here..

[jimharmon]

Thanks. You could check the archives under my profile if you want to and have the time. I do a lot of different things.