Hello Out There [Free Verse]

[cisco]

i wanted to say something with the phrase in it [hello out there]

write me a song..

maybe about a Father`s son..

a Mother`s daughter that never returned from the war.

Isn`t it a sad thing..so write it with heartache

and hope..

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write me a song

maybe about a him or a her

a child with no one to watch over them

"that is a sad thing..so write it with passion

and strength.

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maybe a song about a young woman

frightened and meek..

afraid of the hands that vowed to protect Her..

say She isn`t really alone..

"and then write courage.. if you would,

just a word or two, listen for the whisper..Hello out there

[jimharmon]

Humn! Think I did! It was called "Just One Of the Boys" a sequel to "Pickin' Daffodils"

in lyric critique.

[cisco]

thanks Jim for looking, I`ll go check it out..I`ll leave a note

[jimharmon]

e mailed your friend....never heard back from him. Did my first live performance at a spoken word thing here on Wed. night... gave it my best "Country Impression"

[cisco]

hey Jim..I have a song I sent a couple of days ago too! I haven`t heard a thing either. I got your video, looks like your having a ball.

the video was short...I wanted to hear the whole song...lol