Hai Guise (Noobie Alert)

[Brittani Kiger]

Hi, I'm brittani! I'm 19, I play ukulele, and decided to recently try writing my own music. I'm here for blunt criticism. I'm not scurrrrrred lol. Anyway, I'm a really cool person. I like video games, reading, Walking Dead, anime, and just music altogether. I've been playing ukulele for about 3 years now and every day I improve even more! I usually just do covers but I would like to start writing my own music. Anyway, hi everyone! Feel free to talk to me. I'm awesome, I promise! :3

[justsoulin]

Hi Brittani, welcome to SS

[Brittani Kiger]

Thanks

[symphonious7]

Blunt criticism eh?  Oh well I thought your opening was strong, are you sold on the name Brittani with an i though?  I mean I get that it's "edgy" to use a different spelling but you may just confuse people, really loving the use of rrrrr's in "scurrrrred" but this line right here "I like video games" could probably be a little stronger, I mean, who doesn't like video games, I'd change it to "I irrevocably and obsessively adore and live for the games of video" you know, be poetic.  Playing Ukelele 3 years... yeah I like that line, 3 is a magical number after all, I found the finish to be a bit lacking though, maybe you should say something like "Hi everyone, I ride unicycles and walk tight ropes in the circus while juggling flame throwers".  Blunt criticism.  DONE.  

 

As fun as that was, it was BS.  Nice to meet you hahaha 

[justsoulin]

@ Symph - give it to her both barrels

[symphonious7]

@ Symph - give it to her both barrels

Just doing my job pilgrim.  

[LooknGlass]

Welcome Brittani. You came to the right place to improve your craft. We have some of the most talented and helpful musicians on the net here. Look forward to seeing your work!

[Brittani Kiger]

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Blunt criticism eh?  Oh well I thought your opening was strong, are you sold on the name Brittani with an i though?  I mean I get that it's "edgy" to use a different spelling but you may just confuse people, really loving the use of rrrrr's in "scurrrrred" but this line right here "I like video games" could probably be a little stronger, I mean, who doesn't like video games, I'd change it to "I irrevocably and obsessively adore and live for the games of video" you know, be poetic.  Playing Ukelele 3 years... yeah I like that line, 3 is a magical number after all, I found the finish to be a bit lacking though, maybe you should say something like "Hi everyone, I ride unicycles and walk tight ropes in the circus while juggling flame throwers".  Blunt criticism.  DONE.  

 

As fun as that was, it was BS.  Nice to meet you hahaha 

Oh my, lol. Aren't you just hilarious. haha. Nice to meet you as well!