To Love On

[MPerry]

TO LOVE ON 

 

memories of a kiss 

distilled through years

we are left in flux; becoming invisible  

 

willing to standby waiting- thought we knew

being ignored no explanation of-

careless to a fault- ready to move away or to love on

 

we fall-accepting this blame

here and there-going nowhere

caught up in emotional down draft

 

we live as if-

only to flutter like petals from a deflowered bloom-consumed or diminished

we fade into the elements neither sun nor moon

 

yet from out of the blue

a miracle or two is found-we gather them selfish

these crumbs one by one food for the soul

 

turn around- and we smile frozen

through pictures of glass- time stands still

unfazed by finger prints or coffee stains

 

looking back-we now recall  

what cannot be recalled -through similar pain

that left us with scars-declaring we were there

 

then as the years become a timepiece to remind

a reflection redeemed- aged hand takes aged hand

hurt will rise up to the ceiling- it disperses in a last bid to move on

 

By Michael Perry (copyright)

[GrayGuy]

This is absolutely perfect. I love it.

[MPerry]

Hi Gray

 

Thanks for stopping by and offering a comment, I really do appreciate it!!...regards Mike

[scotsman89]

mike

thought I would read some poetry and fill my head with the pleasure of the words , this one has almost filled it on its own magic .

 

john

[MPerry]

Thanks John, for your really nice comments!...I really appreciate it!....just my thoughts on the many facets of a long term relationship...not autobiographical though, just my observations on human nature and long term people watching!...regards Mike   P.S. Just as a side note..I wish more people contributed to this forum, it could use some more foot traffic as there are alot of good writers on here...and this forum seems to go unnoticed!...regards Mike  

[scotsman89]

Mike don't know if you tried -nothing left inside -  it is a long poem but well worth the read PO

 

john

[MPerry]

Hi John

 

I did and left a comment, thanks for pointing me in that direction!..regards Mike

[LadySeda]

This is beautiful Mike. Some beautiful imagery and description. I found myself getting lost in the visual impact of the words  Great job.

 

Rebecca

[MPerry]

Hi Rebecca

 

Sorry for the really late reply- I took a hiatus- writing new material- and came on and saw your posting- thanks for the really nice comments,  really appreciate it!!...Mike

[THEHOUND]

not my style but its one of the better I read from you...3 star ...but who am I to judge

[MPerry]

Hi Hound

 

Thanks I think?...appreciate you stopping by- looking forward to reading some of your posts!...regards Mike