"Dark Water"

[Madkol]

[Verse 1:]

Take the 'F' out, and get the true meaning of life
Mama said to survive, you gotta stay tough
Don't trip shit, just glide
So I keep a sweatshirt hood over my eyes
I see lyrics in my dreams, so I keep it dark inside
Haven't seen the light of day, since I learned how to write
To see beyond human thoughts, take a trip through my mind
Unwind, and rewind. Get your hands off, this time it's mine
Money talks and I swear it only tells lies
Cry wolf, Im'ma make you motherf*ckers whine
I ain't judging shit, I'm just bluffing man
Half a million people wouldn't be enough cover my ass
For the damage I've done, f*cking with your minds is only half of the fun
I just go with the flow, 'til I'm outta control
Would I end up part of the crowd? f*ck no
Cause the sound of footsteps, represents bullshit
Wipe your feet on the mat, and spell the words 'look back'
Everytime you run, it's in stride with pride
Of the people that are saying that the people never die
Cause vanity is taking precedence over time
But God's coming back with a fire in His eyes

[scotsman89]

like this but feel it is not finished . there needs in my opinion a few more lines or maybe there are musical breaks  that stretch it out ?

john

Edited November 29, 2015 by scotsman89

[Madkol]

Yeah the verse isn't quite finished yet

[Mahesh]

Hi there, 

 

As Hobo has mentioned the board guidelines, I had to remove your other topics. Please make sure you adhere to the guidelines. Let us know if you need help. 

 

Thanks, 

Mahesh

[Madkol]

11 hours ago, Mahesh said:

Hi there,

 

As Hobo has mentioned the board guidelines, I had to remove your other topics. Please make sure you adhere to the guidelines. Let us know if you need help.

 

Thanks,

Mahesh

Sorry for not adhering to the guidelines. Next time I will respond to more of other peoples posts, but can u please put my songs back. I worked really hard on those.

thanks