melted

[kriss]

Melted

I saw a picture of you today

Your model like beauty blew me away

You blew my mind,

You melted my heart

I fell for you again, back at the start

I never stop falling

More in love with you

For every time I see your face

I see something new

Your beauty’s ever growing,

You’re always growing on me

Whenever I am with you I can do anything

I could never get you,

So I’ll sit and stare

I melt when I see your face,

And I see you everywhere

And Ijust melt

i want it to be longer but dont know if it should be

peace

luv

kriss

Edited July 15, 2005 by kriss

[Hope4Peace]

nice one

[rdb90]

Cool, This is a good one dude.

Later

[Steve]

Hey Kriss. This seems a little disjointed to me. I read it through a few times and just kept tripping over it! I like the idea though.

[kriss]

what do u recon i should do? should i do? should i take the verses and make make seperate poems from them?

peace

kriss

[Steve]

I think you should whip down the pub and think obout it over a few beers...

[kriss]

i aint old enough so i whent long boardin wiv a bottle of sambuka and ended up wiv this

I never stop falling

More in love with you

For every time I see your face

I see something new

Your beauty’s ever growing,

You’re always growing on me

Whenever I am with you I can do anything

You make me feel free,

Every time I see your face

My heart stops beating without a single trace

We speak all the time

But never face to face

Why is it different when I look at your face?

is it any better?