Looking for some feedback (brutal honesty appreciated)

[Brayden Roller]

https://soundcloud.com/joseph-roller/apologies

[abacusmc]

Honestly I felt this man. I felt the emotion in it, and I really related, lyrical content wise, I'm glad I listened, as I felt it very much, and it felt relate-able to my music. I felt as though your delivery made the track feel as though it was a cross between rap and spoken word poetry, which there is no problem with! It was a very nice track, and the instrumental fit in perfectly  All I can say is the intro and outro voice was quite unclear, possibly down to the quality of the microphone, or just the way in which you'd distorted the voice. I felt the distortion, and I felt it fit, it was just hard to hear some of the words at times.. But overall, I really felt it..

Keep Writing

[Caine]

I rlly like the effects of pitch and how it moves from left to right ear, how'd you achieve those ffects? reminds me a lil of kendrick