Friend zone

[Evyad Svinkston]

So yeah this is about an unrequited love that you're always there for and pray one day they realize you're there as more than just a friend cause you are tired of seeing them continually broken..

 

When it's all said an done
When they've all had their fun
I'm the one who's left
With all the pieces to pick up
I put you back together
Make you whole once more
Give you back your confidence
Still it's someone else you keep falling for...

 

Chorus

 

If you would take my hand
Give our love a fighting chance
Promise I'll treat you better than he can
But you still look at me.... as just a friend

 

Verse 2

 

When we go out together
Are you even aware
That everyone looks at us
Like we're the perfect pair
I make you laugh make you smile
A shoulder when you need to cry
Hate late nights going home all alone
Hoping one day you'll realize
We belong together should be you an I

 

Bridge

 

I wish you could see
The one you're looking for is me
I've been right here all the time
Just waiting for my chance to shine

[Evyad Svinkston]

Ugh how do I post in the critique section ? I can't figure it out. 

[john]

You should now be able to. You needed 3 posts including your intro post, in order to get permissions to start a topic on the critique board. You would have been able to until your “Ugh how...” post above had been made.