Give in

[rdb90]

Do you fight yourself

to get yourself to give in?

You know you can't win.

Give in, Give in.

Do you try to be better

than the self you previously were?

It doesn't matter in this world.

Give in, Give in.

I gave up feeling so long ago

So long ago I don't even know

What it feelds like to fall in love

You know you can't rise above.

I've tried to be positive for so long.

I give up, it will always be wrong

so I give in, Give in

Do you realize how

much it hurts to find out it's over?

I've felt the pain, and it's so hard to stay sober.

Give in, give in.

Well, I am an optimist just so ya know. I don't drink ...I am 15 so ...Brief periods of negativity never hurt anyone. lol

Later

rob

[Rudi]

Much of creative writing is finding something to explore that everyone knows but hasnt spoken about. Youve done it. Great!

[Steve]

Positive thoughts on a difficult subject! Well done Rob.

[Hope4Peace]

Interesting... i do believe most everyone at one point or another does go through the strugle inside.. when you feel that you just cant win... even the fighters give up (give in) at times... nicely done