New here... Im not singer, but I would like to receive feedback. Ty!

[Tiago Campos]

Hi to all!!!, Im not singer, not at all! Im 100% an amateur person that likes to sing - usually only in Portuguese, my native language, and would like to receive feedback. Is my voice? So-so? Bad? Horrible? Good? Fantastic? I have good or bad tone/timbre? I have good or bad idea of timings? And what about Pitch? Energy? Diction, etc? Im not musician, Idk how to play instruments and I didnt received musical education. Sorry if Im horrible. If im, I will delete this 'cover'.

https://vocaroo.com/1ml2La29UoFj

The name of the song is Maria Albertina - A.Variacoes/Humanos.

[Tiago Campos]

I singed it 20 times more and recorded again. Expecting that is better than above version. But Idk if im not a troll. EDITED - Recorded a third time.
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I have other song called Boa Memoria - Capitao Fausto. Other Style.  1s.
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And my most well trained song.
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Edited September 23, 2022 by Tiago Campos

[Tiago Campos]

People say that my voice much worse in english. I dont say the words as well as in Portuguese, I have a weird accent too. And its more hard for me understand the pitch to sing in tune. Sorry for this disaster ahahahaha
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[Tiago Campos]

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Tried again. But voice is much low...

Edited September 25, 2022 by Tiago Campos

[MisterB]

There's a few wrong notes in there, but I think your singing is fine - you sing in tune and have a good presence about your voice. The quality of the recording is pretty bad, but your singing is fine.

[john]

What Rich said!

 

Welcome to Songstuff Tiago.

[Tiago Campos]

On 10/1/2022 at 12:43 AM, MisterB said:

There's a few wrong notes in there, but I think your singing is fine - you sing in tune and have a good presence about your voice. The quality of the recording is pretty bad, but your singing is fine.

Thanks! Good to know! I started doing singing classes! Last month. My PC micro is horrible. Can explain why recording quality is so bad. I made a Portuguese Rap Song Cover. Sorry for being away, I was busy and forgot the forum. Im back now!

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This is the original version.
 

 

[Hunned Kay]

Its pretty good minus a few tweaks. WELCOME!

[Tiago Campos]

@hunned kay Ty! 

Btw, I need urgent answer. Is this in conditions to be shown to a friend or its better to show other things?
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