never give up

[kriss]

Never give up

Caught between a nightmare and reality

Stuck between truth and lies

In between fate and mortality

Is where my future lies

Underneath all the questions

On top of all the answers

Through all the confusion

Is where the path of life is

Through all tears come laughter

Trough all fear comes hope

From all fighting comes prevalence

And from all hate comes love

it's been a while

[Hope4Peace]

great work!! loved it!

would have liked to see the ending tie it up a little better, it prolly wouldnt hurt to add an extra stanza, but even if not, its still great!!

I absolutly love this part...

"In between fate and mortality

Is where my future lies "

well actually the whole first stanza lol.. but those lines especially!

[Nightwolf]

I like it, welcome back

[Rudi]

Hi kriss, reads pretty good. Not sure about the last 2 lines, though arguably true, they arnt 'ringing' with truth. Enjoyed it though. Hope to see some more.

[Mudknot]

Bitching.

Great poem. Loved every bit of it!

Keep it up!