Last Goodbyes

[Hope4Peace]

All these feelings rushing back

I cant suppress them anymore

cant take this pain I feel inside

as my tears fall to the floor

Just one thought racing through my head

God how I wish I where F***ING DEAD

I cant take this pain

I cant take the lies

The broken promises

My broken cries

You play with my heart

As it dangles on a string

Right in front of your eyes

You can see me slowly dying

I fall to the floor

And beg at your feet

but you laugh in my face

I know Ive been beat

So Ill say my last goodbyes

As I slowly fade away

My last words “I'm so sorry

it had to end this way”

[Da Prophecy]

Very emotional poem. I think it was simple and straightforward which works well for this type of content. This is very gloomy and almost tragic. Good job.