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down in the dirt

down in the dirt nothing more seems to hurt

caked in mud, anger in your blood

face rubbed in it, you know you cant win it

win it back your pride and your place

laugh back in there face

down in the dirt no light in sight

darkness all around, void of all light

but it’s going to be all right

right the wrong take hold and be strong

down in the dirt ,nothing here but bacteria

and you know you wont be seeing her

fight for your self, put hate on a shelf

you can be richer without wealth

start fresh, shower and shave

put on a new face and make it brave

so your trust has been broken, with words unspoken

promises and the future broken

down in the dirt is it time you awoken

a new start will awaken your heart

maybe this time you won’t fall apart

a flame in the dark

 down in the dirt give your tear ducts a rest

rise up, but don’t judge

for you were once caked in mud..

copyright.n.c.lawry..05/03/02

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Hey Nigel

Great, all seemed to go fine until I got to 'tear ducts'. It just seems....awkward.

Other than that, good job dude!

Cheers

John

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put on a new face and make it brave = KICK ASS

Congrats on getting your own posting area ;)

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