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  1. Right Thing - Rock Song

    Hi, Rebooted a dormant song from 3 years ago. I’m a better song writer, arranger, mixer and musician now, so I decided to have another go at it. Plus, I wanted to really play the solo instead of using Shredder 2! Feedback welcome: https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-linton-3/right-thing-v1 JONATHAN LINTON – THE RIGHT THING (Words by Jonathan Linton, Music by Jonathan Linton) Circumstance is so unkind The wrong place at the right time You know it all, you’re intertwined A moral decision consumes your mind Those that know, got you in their sight No escape from the helpless plight Angel on the left shoulder, devil on right Damned if you’re wrong, damned if you’re right Good deeds didn’t prepare you for this Innocence gone, give it one last kiss The righteous path won’t pull you though Sometimes the right thing’s the wrong thing to do The dark side it sucks you in Innocence lost, the ultimate sin The path of light won’t pull you though Sometimes the right thing’s the wrong thing to do Sometimes the right thing’s the wrong thing to do Sometimes the right thing’s the wrong thing to do High in their pulpit they preach to us Holier then thou, in their words we trust And then they’re caught in a boyish lust Hushed by the leaders, it’s so unjust How can they judge, how can they condemn Self preservation’s built in all men They’d do the same if it happened to them Moral decision won’t help you then Good deeds didn’t prepare you for this Innocence gone, give it one last kiss The righteous path won’t pull you though Sometimes the right thing’s the wrong thing to do The dark side it sucks you in Innocence lost, the ultimate sin The path of light won’t pull you though Sometimes the right thing’s the wrong thing to do Sometimes the right thing’s the wrong thing to do Sometimes the right thing’s the wrong thing to do Sometimes the right thing’s the wrong thing to do Sometimes the right thing’s the wrong thing to do Urrrghhh!
  2. Hi there, Always open to a collab - are you interested? PN me.
  3. Wrote a song idea with 3/4 timing and would highly appreciate feedback before I develop it further and eventually write lyrics. Going for a Soundgarden feel - not sure if I pulled it off. https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-linton-3/freedom-of-expression
  4. Hi all,I am looking for a guitarist to lay down a replacement solo for the song below. Ideally it is completed different and bears no trace of the original.https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-linton-3/childrens-home-20150418I want to re-record and remix the song - I am a little smarter and better at recording and singing now. I would love to have a new solo laid down for it.
  5. New Rough Rock Song Idea

    Hi there, Thanks for the feedback. Have some initial ideas for lyrics - recorded them quickly. Not my best performance and still not 100% happy. Feedback welcome: FEARLESS UNAFRAID (Words by Jonathan Linton, Music by Jonathan Linton) A leap of faith I take It’s too late To procrastinate Dreams and fears are packed Wheels hit tarmac There’s no going back One foot, in front of the other There’s a whole world to discover Future’s not certain for me But I move on Fearless unfraid Master of my destiny So I move on Fearless unfraid I’m movin’ on, fearless unfraid I’m movin’ on, fearless unfraid I’m movin’ on, fearless unfraid I’m movin’ on….fearless….un…afraid Like Doctor Livingstone I face the unknown Leave the comfort zone Courage that cannot fade I’m not afraid Of the choice I made One foot, infront of the other There’s a whole world to discover Future’s not certain for me But I move on Fearless unfraid Master of my destiny So I move on Fearless unfraid I’m movin’ on, fearless unfraid I’m movin’ on, fearless unfraid I’m movin’ on, fearless unfraid I’m movin’ on….fearless….un…afraid
  6. Hypnotize me, Override Me (Demo)

    Cool song idea. Vocals are really really good. You definitely captured a 70s glam rock feeling, especially the vocal arrangement. Mix could do with some work - guitars are too low. Drums could be mixed better - more ambience, do not sound like they were treated with the usual onslaught of plugins, vocals are too loud. I would make the solo more exciting and longer - it gets buried. The guitar tones don't do it for me - a little too fuzzy, maybe EQ them and bring out more mids? Also, I would double-track the guitars, sounds like they are mono and panned L only. I would spice up the intro a bit - like you have a kick on the 1,2,3,4 for the intro. I would have the guitar come in alone for 4 bars, then have the kick and two toms play on 2 and 4 and add an exciting roll to bring in the song. Sometimes less is more, and it will make the build up more dynamic - just a suggestion. I would also consider for the guitars to alternate palm muting with some unmuted strums to make the guitar part more exciting. Hope this helps.
  7. New Rough Rock Song Idea

    Hi all, Came up with this song idea and would appreciate feedback before I continue and write lyrics. https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-linton-3/song-idea-80
  8. Raise the Dead

    The song has potential and is "in your face" as it should be, but (no offense) given the quality of recordings that everyone expects these days, even for rough song ideas, the quality is poor. I sounds like a live recording - I would try a rough multitrack recording and mix. The song itself is just screaming for it (no pun intended!) cause it is a high energy catchy tune. Rock on! \m/
  9. The wall (UPDATED)

    I like this song. The guitar tone in intro is cool. Cool vocals and nice mix - well done! Rock on! \m/
  10. Hi all, I just joined Audiojungle and want to start writing royalty free tracks. My first submission was rejected as "this submission does not meet our commercial production (sample quality/mixing/mastering) standard, unfortunately". Could anyone please give me advise on what I should work on? The track is below: Regards, Jonathan
  11. Darker Side - Metal Song

    Hi dnafe, Thanks for the feedback! Are you critiquing the Youtube live soundtrack or the Soundcloud recording? Regards, Jonathan
  12. Darker Side - Metal Song

    Here is the live version. What do you think?
  13. Darker Side - Metal Song

    Thanks for the feedback. Here is an improved mix - feedback welcome. It seems alot of people suggest a distorted different guitar tone. I will experiment and rerecord.
  14. I Hope

    I am not a big country fan, but this is a really cool song - has mainstream appeal too! Really good mix - full, good balance, and professional sounding! Good use of dynamics too. Can't find anything I would change other than making the solo a little more prominent - eq or some delay/FX?
  15. Darker Side - Metal Song

    Please give your feedback on my song. https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-linton-3/darker-side-20140222 DARKER SIDE (Words and music by Jonathan Linton) It lives in the dark of the night Everywhere but out of sight Fighting the forces of light It lives inside of you In hate and anger it breaks through Then it controls what you do BRIDGE Deep down inside every human soul Dormant it waits to take control It’s your darker side Its presence cannot be denied It takes control and you abide Decent to evil you will slide It’s your darker side Best defense is know it’s there Confess sins with daily prayer Keep evil in its lair Try you like it’s certainty Given right opportunity Will become your identity BRIDGE Deep down inside every human soul Dormant it waits to take control It’s your darker side Its presence cannot be denied It takes control and you abide Decent to evil you will slide It’s your darker side SOLO: 2 x VERSE 4 x BRIDGE It’s your darker side Its presence cannot be denied It takes control and you abide Decent to evil you will slide It’s your darker side It’s your darker side Its presence cannot be denied It takes control and you abide Decent to evil you will slide It’s your darker side
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