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Always On My Mind

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Always On My Mind  

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I've recently added the first (very preliminary) mix to the songwriting critique board.

Always On My Mind

This is a slower mix, also pitched down a little. I have also started a slightly higher pitched and faster version for comparison, but that is not posted yet.

I know there's lots wrong with the actual mix, but I'm trying to get the feel going. This is the first track I've recorded in a while, and I didn't use my usual recording set up. It's nice to be back recording. :)

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I hear improvizational flute between chorus one and verse two and over parts of chorus two going out. Maybe acoustic snare rim on beats 2 & 4 throughout for continuous inertia. I like the french horn pads in the seques. Mix sometimes hints of Billy Idol, ae. 'Cuts You Up'. On the intro riff, maybe use acoustic guitar and OD a single, complimentary harmony in thirds or open 4ths, 5ths and 6ths, a-la Willie Nelson's Spanish Martin-with-a-hole-in-it style. I like it, Man. Meditative. Thanks.

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