Hi Joshua, i Have to admit, i came to read a couple of times and the white text on black background had me moving on. Silly for sure, and glad i came back to read. Pretty dang good. Tough, relevant, probing..
Elephant tie in is good but maybe a line about a donkey would be good.
These 2 lines kinda stuck out as different tone and cadence for me.
Seeing these as the "follow up" to line 1, i'm not sure that the line with the options given support the rest of the lyric as it reads to me.
The world split in two which side do you choose?/The big business view, or the plants with the greenish hue,/
Good read and you kept me thinking.
Peggy
Good rhymes!!