m1k3
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I like this a lot. In my opinion, you're very talented. Most rappers that use a high amount of multisyllable rhymes have a lot of filler. All of your's have substance and a point. This is impressive work and I realize the effort that goes into lyrics like that.
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I like that song. Overall, your recreation isn't bad, but I would've enjoyed it more if it rhymed more to make it flow smoother.
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I enjoyed it too. I also think what omenrama posted would help the writer and the audience.
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I liked your ( Rebel's ) second verse the most. I think the entire work got better as it progressed. I also agree with MrDoubleMan. This would definitely improve the flow of the rhyme.
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I form evil quatrains torture from the Renaissance age pressin' hombres 'til thier body is concave welcome to the mindset of hip hop's enclave beyond brave hand feeding tigers chopped steak in the Sunderbans a place where humans are entrees " donde ? " a thousand miles east of Bombay I leave cities destroyed like Pompeii mouth is Mount Vesuvius even when I'm blasè Any feedback is welcome.
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