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Hello BlueNote, I appreciate the crit and I agree its not my best recording. I am still working on learning Pro Tools properly. I am new to recording with an actual mic too. I think I had my interface volume set to high. Thanks sister!

Hello Peggy! Nice to meet you. Thank you for the suggestions. I do agree, it is much smoother this way. I just gotta remember to check my work before posting it. Thank you everyone for being so kind.

Edit 1 Outside the boisterous bounds of waved echo it's ample... etude found within the volume of a sizing crest Its silence below and above the trough at rest But placid within the origin where tranquil best Restful, a nest serene, until a mother's press Unforeseen, when wings aggressed Yes, tempestuous nonetheless. Yet, ideally soundless when nature’s left. Outside the boisterous bounds of waved echo it's ample... etude found within the volume of a sizing crest Its silence below and above the trough at rest But placid within the origin where tranquil best Restful, a nest serene, until a mothers press Unforeseen, when wings aggressed Yes, tempestuous nonetheless. Yet, ideally soundless when nature’s left.

Its different but interesting. Some parts where hard to understand and other flowed pretty good.

Sorry about that I am doing a progression on this. So I removed the older tracks.

I've seen the pain in your smile and drank the tears from your heart. I've run my head through a wall to keep my crazy thoughts separate apart. It seems like it's all for nothing because all they see is my insane action. But won't ever see I just lost my traction. I've said so many times it wouldn't happen again. That I wouldn't let it... But to tell you the truth means I'll end up just back tracking. Because no one has the power over me the way that a woman can and if I let you have it I'm no longer a man. Either way I'm just as scared but I'm not suppose to ever show it. Maybe we are better off alone but still the feeling won't quit. It ain't the things you do that pulls me close to you it's just the feeling I get. I can't explain it so I probably shouldn't even try cause I can't change the way I'm seen when it comes from your eyes I wouldn't want to how could I I'm hypnotized Telling you this now pulls me closer to the ledge cause every moment I exist without you is just another breath until my death. I've always known I was out of your league so I've settled for less just to get close to what's left. It's not right for me all for you more less shrugged it off felt the pain in my chest Because I'm not there yet to be with the best just the way we learn to contest. Grown past the lust of a boy left with no touch what's left? Change and gained trust I've grown this much then like a bet I say I know this wont bust an watched a for sure thing teach me a lesson in terms that pride sucks Why should I even bother when I've seen it all before. Reliving the good times followed by the bad once more. You're right f*ck trying lets just go on dying wondering what for? I'm sorry but does that make any sense? I'll stand here an watch you defeat yourself and what more? pretend that I'm really your friend an I'm just floored. When you remember how great you are.. But you wanna know whats worst and guts core than you never seeing me? It's you never seeing you it cuts more.

I have been working on a progression for a rap song. Here it is so far. All crits are welcome. Please be constructive in your crits I want to get better. I Against All