silence

[nigel lawry]

silence

your silence whispers loud

i want to embrace you but its not allowed

feeling like a stranger in a crowd

your silence whispers loud as a bell

it's ringing my ears and making my heart swell

guess it's time to get up from where i fell

your silence is clear as mud

confusing signs like blood on blood

once again time to face the flood

your silence says so much

i just wish i could touch

embrace it ,never did learn how to fake it

silence my oldest friend

swear your gonna drive me round the bend

like a phone that never rings

sit back and listen to your heart sing

a song of love or despair

it's time to find out what's in there

in a world full of spiteful air

look around and see who really cares

i know i am intense

but there’s one thing i hate

and it's a fence

don't block me in or shut me out

I'm guessing silence is your easy way out

Copyright ©2005Nigel Lawry

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[Nightwolf]

Hi Nigel,

Good job on this. It has HUGE potential as a Lyric.

I suggest:

silence is my oldest friend

as a title

silence is my oldest friend

swear your gonna drive me round the bend

like a phone that never rings

sit back and listen to the way your heart sings

Would be a good Chorus

[nigel lawry]

Hi Nigel,

Good job on this. It has HUGE potential as a Lyric.

I suggest:

silence is my oldest friend

as a title

silence is my oldest friend

swear your gonna drive me round the bend

like a phone that never rings

sit back and listen to the way your heart sings

Would be a good Chorus

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cheers john

maybe it has too many rhymes for a lyric it just came to me as it is (poem)

but you know me.. could have a lyric real soon...

[Hope4Peace]

I love this!! especially the last 2 stanzas!!! the last ending is my favorite!! great job!

*~peace and love~*

*~Amanda Hope~*