#29 The Great Robbery

[jamestoffee]

http://singmeastory.org/

 

The Sing Me a Story Foundation combines the imaginations of children in hospitals, children's homes, vulnerable youth organizations and hospices with the talents of songwriters to create stories and songs that bring joy to all those involved.

 

This story was written by Otis (age | Partner Organization: Hospice of Toronto

 

See the attachment for his story as the basis for this song

 

#29 The Great Robbery

 

http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=12703165

 

On a bright day in the neighborhood

A man in a mask laughed “Hee, hee, hee“

He saw a woman said, “Give me your purseâ€

The woman was afraid and screamed!

 

The great robbery

The great robbery

 

Ten minutes later the man had the purse

The woman was sad and screamed!

Ten seconds later police cars came

Lights were flashing at the scene

 

A policeman had his handcuffs out and said, “Don’t touch himâ€

She watched and said, “Ok†as the policeman took him away

 

The great robbery

The great robbery

 

Then she said, “Let him go.   He is a person.  He is good.

It took a story from Otis for me to notice

We can’t rob this man of his humanity

He learned his lesson.  Set him freeâ€

 

Set him free

Set him free

Set him free

Set him free

Edited March 1, 2014 by jamestoffee

[goldylocks]

James, I took a look at the site. I think it's wonderful that you composed that song. It teaches so much love and forgiveness for those who are desperate and make mistakes. A very cute song! I read the story too, and it suits it perfectly. Nice song!

 

 

Goldy

 

 

[jamestoffee]

Hi Goldy,

 

Thanks for the listen and feedback  

 

James

 

P.S. You are very creative with your picture tags.  I'll need to learn how to do that someday from you

[jamestoffee]

Update:  The song was accepted for submission.  

 

Here is a link to the story, song and donation:

 

View the song here: http://singmeastory....obbery?song=439

[ames1212]

Cool song!

[jamestoffee]

Hi Amy,

 

Thanks for the listen and post

 

James