Third Path

[Blazeit27]

(Flow, once again.. up in this.

you know there's so many f*cking things going on right now. not much time. I can't even think straight..

f*ck it. [Third Path.] been there..done that.. now I'm here.)

Decisions, decisions..

I'm getting so many visions.

So many paths to take, to accomplish my missions..

I don't have time to think about petitions Or faith to waste, believing predictions.

I'm gunnah do what I'm here to do..

Whether it's before, during, or after you;

I'm gunnah take what I have to take.

There's no pausing, stopping, or taking a break.

If you have something against me,

My advice remains the same, see..

You gottah eliminate what you hate.

But If you die trying, then that was fate..

It's never too early & It's never too late.

Always on time,

To make things worse or to make it all fine.. Don't you wait on the planets to align.

Roll up some blunts or sniff up some lines..

Stay cool. Worry about your own issues, I'll worry about mines.

You gottah look deep & think beyond the place you get to through your mind..

What do you really want? Don't start lying 'N Bullshitting me w/ what your pastor wants.. Cuss' you'll find no happiness with that.. He's here to lead you, not to think for your ass

Certainly, that's a fact.

If you don't follow dreams composed by you, your life will always be wack.

The Scriptures tell us to love one another.. But how can I with ease, when I turn to see a brother, stealing from someone older than his own mother.?

How am I not supposed to get mad, at the fact-that this poor woman's now sad cuss' this bitch just took everything she had..?

And lad, I know the money problems are intense.. Got you the feeling of being in between a fence.. got no cash for food sometimes yet you daydream all times of yourself in a benz.

I know sometimes life makes no sense, & you might 'just' be trying to pay your rent

And that's cool but steal & kill motherf*ckers from other gangs.. Make sure that the fight they put up is as dense, no Just sense in breaking the weak for their cents.

Don't be a Coward.

If your dreams are to make someone proud, then let me give you a doubt..

What will you do when they're gone & you realize you're on the wrong route..?

Always doing the usual..this is crucial..

Keep going & you with Misery'll be mutual.

& The saddest part is, it'll feel neutral..

Like nothing new. like the fact that neither sadness or happiness were ever by my side..

they both had different lives, but both equally died..

sadness developed into anger; making happiness, a serious.. infinite danger.

& that's cuss' now I have something to lose..

Much more important than partying, smoking up, drinking booze.

There's only one true destination for me and my shoes..

we're gunnah lead the way.. leaving no clues.

it's just some people make my anger greater, than the one Hitler had for the Jews.

i can't let it go, and pretend like it "flew."

cuss' in reality, it just f*cking grew.

Believe me, im trying to take advice and think shit through..

but i realize that all which goes wrong, is because of 'you.'

so imma make things right, without hesitating to..

meanwhile, take notes.

cuss' you never know how deep imma go, like slope.

i just might.. Again, leave you stoked..

so many rhymes enter your mind that it floods, you need a boat..

just to be able to think as subliminal messages kill your thoughts & you start to sink.. quicker than your quickest blink.

you died in your own mind, you're starting to stink..

that's what I'm here for, I didn't come here to sing..

nor am I here to bring, anything that won't sting. I'm spitting life & death, not bling.. Money, hoes, or playing pretend-king.. Like most wack artists here, in this rap thing..

i believe in saying nothing but the truth.

(even if it isn't nice & smooth..)

even if it hurts.. Atleast it'll be out there free, like the birds..

three thirds, of my verse, come to you like a hearse..

take that life like a purse..

But first,

I'll allow you to Take that last breath carefully,

Don't think blamefully;

It's not your fault, You had no other option.. They were in a vault.

Locked, like your freedom.. Cuss i took it all..

God was your creator but i am the one that Finished you.

I took all that you had & cut its values in half, now im mean-munching & having a laugh..

high as f*ck, but still good with the math.

not a "nerd" thoe, fresh.. like i just took a bath.. just to relax & organize all these facts..

keep them in mind, nice 'n packed.

ready to go, & hit like a slap..

(if this was a race, you'd be way over-lapped. Hahah)

probably looking for me using google, but I don't show up in maps.

I won't tell you where I'm at, but you're way in the back.

you've got nothing. im chilling, smoking 'n puffing..

no shit-stuffings.. i'd rather get to the toughing, risk up the cuffing..

cuss' getting caught's random, like card-shuffling.

(It's simple as that.. there's nothing more to it. either you're in.. or you're out.

Third Path.)

[Dhananjay M Venkatesh]

Wow this goes hard and its really long. I like your writing style and wordplay. You said you've had troubles with hooks? Well what u do is, I write to a beat with a hook. But anyways this is nice, I like your style like I said.

Peace

[Blazeit27]

I appreciate the advice, man. I guess Im just lazy then, I have put up 2 tracks on Soundcloud(1 which was my 1st recording & first lyric) but I wasn't even able to realize that the beat helps me with creating the lyric for the hook haha, now I can get to it.

Jah Bless

[omenrama]

It is very hard on the eyes.

[nihalkolar]

its pretty good stuff
good internal rhymes 
it was longggggggggg lol
work on ya hook
its easier to write songs with a beat, gives u a better flow and sets ur mood, know what i mean?
its easier to write hooks too
get in some multi-syllable rhymes
 

[project2wo]

this is good stuff, reminds me of a local place near me for some reason........I like how most o the words end up as a rhyme in the right place....thumbs up

[AmirMaor]

Very long, but good... well done

[Blazeit27]

Project2wo, a local place near you?

I appreciate you guys for reading.

God bless

[omenrama]

I would like to see you: find a subject; research the subject; write an outline (focusing on the end); and stick to it. It might help to give your lyrics a sense of direction or purpose. I like to come up with titles that will then inform the lyrical journ. When I have found a title; I read and take notes on that particular subject. When beginning I say to myself: "All filler lines will be removed before or during punch up"