rap I hope this is not Goodbye

[SoulHuntah]

I was a young and happy kid

Always so friendly and kind

But I changed because of what people did

Still I'm kindhearted you'll find

If you meet me at the right time

 

I came here innocent and good

But life taught me things are not the way they seem

Evil people robbed me of my happy mood

It was all too good to be true

 

But none of that matters now

I'll forgive them anyhow

Holding grudges is pointless

It'll only make you feel worthless

 

So now I need to say what's right

These might be the last rhymes I'll ever f*cking write

Made too many bad choices in life

And now I might be going under the knife

Yesterday might have been the last good night of my life

 

I'm starting to pass out

Would like to write more without a doubt

Got lots more to say

Hopefully I will one day

 

God I'm not angry with you

I know you know this to be true

And maybe soon I will be with you

 

This is it for now

I'm thankful for my life

Hope I survive this somehow

Maybe one day I'll even find a wife

 

 

 

Edited March 13, 2016 by SoulHuntah
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[SoulHuntah]

Thanks. Yeah I haven't been using hooks in my rhymes. It's something I just never thought of or keep on forgetting. I'll get in the habit of adding hooks and I think it should improve the lyrics. Thanks for reminding me!  

 

I also appreciate the feedback so I'll check out some of your stuff when I find time again. 

 

Peace,

Soul