Quiet

[Scr1pter]

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Outside the boisterous bounds of waved echo
it's ample...

etude found within the volume of a sizing crest

Its silence below and above the trough at rest

But placid within the origin where tranquil best

Restful, a nest serene, until a mother's press

Unforeseen, when wings aggressed

Yes, tempestuous nonetheless.

Yet, ideally soundless when nature’s left.

Outside the boisterous bounds of waved echo
it's ample...

etude found within the volume of a sizing crest

Its silence below and above the trough at rest

But placid within the origin where tranquil best

Restful, a nest serene, until a mothers press

Unforeseen, when wings aggressed

Yes, tempestuous nonetheless.

Yet, ideally soundless when nature’s left.

Edited February 13, 2020 by Scr1pter

[Mac Wilkey]

I think its saying what you want to say.  Word play seems to be something you prize.  you've done well

[RC James]

This reminds me of the dadaist poets in its word play - rough around the edges but somehow to the point by the use of familiar lodestone words like nature.

Edited July 4, 2021 by RC James