Mac Wilkey

@Michan--the poet captures his predicament exactly. He can hardly think straight because he's in love. Think about it that way. @SilentPoetI like it because it does capture what I think you're trying to portray. I don't like it becae I hate tous be in that predicament and I don't want to think about it again. It ws bad enough the first time .

I think its saying what you want to say. Word play seems to be something you prize. you've done well