Betrayer Demands An Audience

[Jac]

was just looking through my old work..found this from 2017..hope you like it.

 

Poem title

Betrayer Demands An Audience

 

Pretty smiles

dressed in camouflage

full in view, but hidden

talking in sincerity

to silent attentive listeners.

 

Impressive Actor

his stage now set

for the betrayer demands an audience

he's inspired from arising cheers

see. his deceitful decorations near

 

And when found out

he's drawn them in

his performance was just to win

his stage impressive

and the Actor glorious

for the betrayer demands an audience.

 

 

 

[jhanover]

Cool. Kind of a take on social media. 

[RC James]

You could do without "attentive" - in last line of second stanza - otherwise well done.