Anybody Listening?

[McnaughtonPark]

Anybody Listening?

Dialog between two owls,

First from one then the other,

Sounds like who,

Sounds like who,

Did you listen to me brother?

Heard between two missles,

Were the hissing thunder whistles,

On their way,

Hit their prey,

Crunching down into the gristle.

Put an ear against two countries,

tick | tick | tick | tick

tick | tick | tick | tick

tick | tick | tick | tick | tock.

[Mazrocon]

Interesting,

Thought it is quite short and i'm not entirely sure what you're trying to say. I like the ending, doesn't really fit but if you made the rest of the poem more clear that'd be a great ending

~TIMOTHY~

[neoism]

ok ..........getting through this i got.......why you replied such at my song "Face T(w)o Face"

but i have replied to what you have written over there......so if you wanna ... just check it out

~prayag~

[typo]

didn't get the last stanza. well not really. liked the first two. not saying it wouldn't work, but right now in context it doesn't work for me. it seems disconnected from the rest.

[McnaughtonPark]

All this thing was, was a shake it loose tool. Didn't have much meaning, just a creative whatever to start the juices flowing. I think I wrote Hand me Down Shoes around this time.