Like That Carrie Underwood Song

[poeticfreefall]

Would you want me if I were skinnier

Prettier, brainier, funnier?

Bet you’d still want her

I can change my look

Get more into books

Paint my nails, dye my hair

Carefully choose what to wear

But for real who cares

You think I need you?

Please you wish that were true

Going around saying I'm obsessed with you?

You think I'm crying over you? boo hoo

You know what? f*ck you!

You were just a waste of my time

Why settle for a penny when I can get a dime?

f*ck, I could get a mili if I wanted

Thats what you get for taking me for granted

And all those days I spent alone

When you should have been blowing up my phone

With heart eye emojis and shit

Man I thought you were it

But I guess we all make mistakes

One of us had to hit the brakes

How'd you do that though?

You decided to cheat on me with some blonde hoe

Worthless is what you are

Hope you don’t mind that I keyed your car

Like that Carrie Underwood song

I’ll save some trouble for the next girl you do wrong

[ALOPRODUCTIONZ]

good story in the lyrics.  i think you should play around with the rhyme structure, and also work on the start and end in your rhymes.

on these lyrics they start weak, end strong. on others they start strong, end weak

[poeticfreefall]

5 hours ago, ALOPRODUCTIONZ said:

good story in the lyrics.  i think you should play around with the rhyme structure, and also work on the start and end in your rhymes.

on these lyrics they start weak, end strong. on others they start strong, end weak

Thanks! I will work on that! Thanks for the feedback!